Fix EN typos

Small corrections for grammar and fluency [en_US].

git-svn-id: svn://kolibrios.org@10058 a494cfbc-eb01-0410-851d-a64ba20cac60
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Andrew 2024-05-28 14:15:26 +00:00
parent f133c9d045
commit 349dbb6edf
8 changed files with 36 additions and 37 deletions

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@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ arp_input:
.gotit:
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "ARP_input: found matching entry\n"
cmp [esi + ARP_entry.TTL], ARP_STATIC_ENTRY ; if it is a static entry, dont touch it
cmp [esi + ARP_entry.TTL], ARP_STATIC_ENTRY ; if it is a static entry, don't touch it
je .exit
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "ARP_input: updating entry\n"
@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ arp_input:
cmp [edx + ARP_header.Opcode], ARP_REQ_OPCODE
jne .exit
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "ARP_input: its a request\n"
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "ARP_input: it is a request\n"
mov eax, [IPv4_address + edi]
cmp eax, [edx + ARP_header.TargetIP] ; Is it looking for my IP address?
@ -388,10 +388,10 @@ arp_add_entry:
cmp [edi + ARP_entry.Status], ARP_NO_ENTRY ; is this slot empty?
je .add
cmp [edi + ARP_entry.IP], eax ; if not, check if it doesnt collide
cmp [edi + ARP_entry.IP], eax ; if not, check it doesn't collide
jne .maybe_next
cmp [edi + ARP_entry.TTL], ARP_STATIC_ENTRY ; ok, its the same IP, update it if not static
cmp [edi + ARP_entry.TTL], ARP_STATIC_ENTRY ; ok, it's the same IP, update it if not static
jne .add
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_ERROR, "ARP_add_entry: failed, IP already has a static entry\n"

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@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ macro ipv4_checksum ptr {
;-----------------------------------------------------------------;
; ;
; ipv4_input: Check if IPv4 Packet isnt damaged and call ;
; ipv4_input: Check the IPv4 Packet is not damaged and call ;
; appropriate handler. (TCP/UDP/ICMP/..) ;
; We will also re-construct fragmented packets. ;
; ;
@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ ipv4_input:
cmp eax, 224
je .ip_ok
; maybe we just dont have an IP yet and should accept everything on the IP level
; maybe we just don't have an IP yet and should accept everything on the IP level
cmp [IPv4_address + edi], 0
je .ip_ok
@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ ipv4_input:
or edi, -1
.find_last_entry: ; The following routine will try to find the last entry
cmp edi, [esi + sizeof.NET_BUFF + IPv4_FRAGMENT_entry.PrevPtr]
jne .destroy_slot ; Damn, something screwed up, remove the whole slot (and free buffers too if possible!)
jne .destroy_slot ; Oh, something screwed up, remove the whole slot (and free buffers too if possible!)
mov edi, esi
mov esi, [esi + sizeof.NET_BUFF + IPv4_FRAGMENT_entry.NextPtr]
cmp esi, -1
@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ ipv4_input:
.count_bytes:
cmp [esi + sizeof.NET_BUFF + IPv4_FRAGMENT_entry.PrevPtr], edi
jne .destroy_slot_pop ; Damn, something screwed up, remove the whole slot (and free buffers too if possible!)
jne .destroy_slot_pop ; Oh, something screwed up, remove the whole slot (and free buffers too if possible!)
mov cx, [esi + sizeof.NET_BUFF + sizeof.IPv4_FRAGMENT_entry + IPv4_header.TotalLength] ; Add total length
xchg cl, ch
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "IPv4_input: Packet size=%u\n", cx
@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ ipv4_input:
mov [esi + sizeof.NET_BUFF + IPv4_FRAGMENT_entry.PrevPtr], edi
mov [esi + sizeof.NET_BUFF + IPv4_FRAGMENT_entry.Owner], ebx
mov cx, [edx + IPv4_header.TotalLength] ; Note: This time we dont substract Header length
mov cx, [edx + IPv4_header.TotalLength] ; Note: This time we don't substract Header length
xchg cl, ch
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "IPv4_input: Packet size=%u\n", cx
add ax, cx
@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ ipv4_input:
push eax
call kernel_alloc
test eax, eax
je .destroy_slot_pop12 ; If we dont have enough space to allocate the buffer, discard all packets in slot
je .destroy_slot_pop12 ; If we don't have enough space to allocate the buffer, discard all packets in slot
mov edx, [esp+8] ; Get pointer to first fragment entry back in edx
; FIXME: Allocate NET_BUFF here instead of raw IP packet buffer
@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ ipv4_input:
cmp edi, eax ; Is this packet the first fragment ?
je .first_fragment
sub cx, bx ; If not, dont copy the header
sub cx, bx ; If not, don't copy the header
add esi, ebx ;
add edi, ebx ; FIXME: We should add size of header of first fragment here
; instead of size of currently copying fragment

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@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ macro ipv6_init {
;-----------------------------------------------------------------;
; ;
; ipv6_input: Check if IPv6 Packet isnt damaged and call ;
; ipv6_input: Check the IPv6 Packet is not damaged and call ;
; appropriate handler. (TCP/UDP/ICMP/..) ;
; We will also re-construct fragmented packets ;
; ;
@ -285,4 +285,3 @@ ipv6_api:
.packets_rx:
mov eax, [IPv6.packets_rx + eax]
ret

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@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
; The Queues implemented by these macros form a ring-buffer.
; The data to these queue's always looks like this:
;
; At top, you have the queue struct, wich has the size (number of currently queued packets, read and write pointers.
; This struct is followed by a number of slots wich you can read and write to using the macros.
; At top, you have the queue struct, which has the size number of currently queued packets, read and write pointers.
; This struct is followed by a number of slots which you can read and write to using the macros.
; How these slots look like is up to you to chose, normally they should have at least a pointer to where the real data is.
; (you can see some examples below)
@ -37,8 +37,8 @@ ends
; entry_size = size of one slot, in bytes
; failaddr = the address where macro will jump to when there is no data in the queue
; additionally, add_to_queue requires you to set esi to the data wich you want to queue
; get_from_queue on the other hand will return a pointer in esi, to the entry you're interessed in
; additionally, add_to_queue requires you to set esi to the data which you want to queue
; get_from_queue on the other hand will return a pointer in esi, to the entry you're interested in
; PS: macros WILL destroy ecx and edi
macro add_to_queue ptr, size, entry_size, failaddr {
@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ local .ok, .no_wrap
spin_lock_irqsave
cmp [ptr + queue.size], size ; Check if queue isnt full
cmp [ptr + queue.size], size ; Check if queue isn't full
jb .ok
spin_unlock_irqrestore

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@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ socket_close:
mov dword[esp + SYSCALL_STACK.eax], 0 ; The socket exists, so we will succeed in closing it.
or [eax + SOCKET.options], SO_NONBLOCK ; Mark the socket as non blocking, we dont want it to block any longer!
or [eax + SOCKET.options], SO_NONBLOCK ; Mark the socket as non blocking, we don't want it to block any longer!
test [eax + SOCKET.state], SS_BLOCKED ; Is the socket still in blocked state?
jz @f
@ -1055,7 +1055,7 @@ socket_send_tcp:
mov [esp + SYSCALL_STACK.eax], ecx
mov [eax + SOCKET.errorcode], 0
push eax
call tcp_output ; FIXME: this doesnt look pretty, does it?
call tcp_output ; FIXME: this doesn't look pretty, does it?
pop eax
mov eax, [eax + SOCKET.errorcode]
mov [esp + SYSCALL_STACK.ebx], eax
@ -1834,7 +1834,7 @@ socket_ring_free:
ret
.error: ; we could free all available bytes, but that would be stupid, i guess..
.error: ; we could free all available bytes, but that would be stupid, I guess..
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_ERROR, "SOCKET_ring_free: buffer=%x error!\n", eax
add [eax + RING_BUFFER.size], ecx

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@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ endl
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "TCP_input: socket ptr=%x state=%u flags=%x\n", ebx, [ebx + TCP_SOCKET.t_state], [edx + TCP_header.Flags]:2
;----------------------------
; Check if socket isnt closed
; Check if socket is not closed
cmp [ebx + TCP_SOCKET.t_state], TCPS_CLOSED
je .drop_no_socket
@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ endl
push ecx
mov cl, [ebx + TCP_SOCKET.SND_SCALE]
shl eax, cl
mov dword[edx + TCP_header.Window], eax ; word after window is checksum, we dont need checksum anymore
mov dword[edx + TCP_header.Window], eax ; word after window is checksum, we don't need checksum anymore
pop ecx
;-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ endl
mov [ebx + TCP_SOCKET.ts_ecr], eax
or [temp_bits], TCP_BIT_TIMESTAMP
; Since we have a timestamp, lets do the paws test right away!
; Since we have a timestamp, let's do the paws test right away!
test [edx + TCP_header.Flags], TH_RST
jnz .no_paws
@ -1270,7 +1270,7 @@ endl
jz .ack_processed
; If we can't receive any more data, then closing user can proceed.
; Starting the timer is contrary to the specification, but if we dont get a FIN,
; Starting the timer is contrary to the specification, but if we don't get a FIN,
; we'll hang forever.
test [ebx + SOCKET.state], SS_CANTRCVMORE
@ -1514,7 +1514,7 @@ endl
inc [edx + TCP_header.SequenceNumber]
; Drop any received data that doesnt fit in the receive window.
; Drop any received data that doesn't fit in the receive window.
cmp ecx, [ebx + TCP_SOCKET.RCV_WND]
jbe .dont_trim
@ -1542,7 +1542,7 @@ endl
.ack_processed:
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "TCP_input: ACK processed\n"
; dont look at window if no ACK
; don't look at window if no ACK
test [edx + TCP_header.Flags], TH_ACK
jz .no_window_update
@ -1668,7 +1668,7 @@ endl
cmp [ebx + TCP_SOCKET.t_state], TCPS_ESTABLISHED
jne .out_of_order
; Ok, lets do this.. Set delayed ACK flag and copy data into socket buffer
; Ok, let's do this.. Set delayed ACK flag and copy data into socket buffer
or [ebx + TCP_SOCKET.t_flags], TF_DELACK
@ -1691,7 +1691,7 @@ endl
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "TCP data is out of order!\nSequencenumber is %u, we expected %u.\n", \
[edx + TCP_header.SequenceNumber], [ebx + TCP_SOCKET.RCV_NXT]
; Uh-oh, some data is out of order, lets call TCP reassemble for help
; Uh-oh, some data is out of order, let's call TCP reassemble for help
call tcp_reassemble ;;; TODO!
@ -1835,7 +1835,7 @@ endl
test [edx + TCP_header.Flags], TH_RST
jnz .done
; TODO: if its a multicast/broadcast, also drop
; TODO: if it's a multicast/broadcast, also drop
test [edx + TCP_header.Flags], TH_ACK
jnz .respond_ack
@ -1871,7 +1871,7 @@ endl
test [edx + TCP_header.Flags], TH_RST
jnz .drop_no_socket
; TODO: if its a multicast/broadcast, also drop
; TODO: if it's a multicast/broadcast, also drop
test [edx + TCP_header.Flags], TH_ACK
jnz .respond_seg_ack

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@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ endl
; esi = data len
;---------------------------------------------
; check if we dont exceed the max segment size
; check if we don't exceed the max segment size
add esi, edi ; total TCP segment size
cmp esi, [eax + TCP_SOCKET.t_maxseg]
@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ endl
.eos:
;---------------------------------------------------
; Dont increase sequence number when resending a FIN
; Don't increase sequence number when resending a FIN
test dl, TH_FIN
jz .no_fin_retransmit
@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ endl
;----------------------------------------------------
; Calculate the receive window.
; Dont shrink window, but avoid silly window syndrome
; Don't shrink window, but avoid silly window syndrome
xor ebx, ebx
test [eax + SOCKET.state], SS_CANTRCVMORE

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@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ macro tcp_checksum IP1, IP2 {
macro tcp_sendseqinit ptr {
push edi ;;;; FIXME: i dont like this static use of edi
push edi ;;;; FIXME: I don't like this static use of edi
mov edi, [ptr + TCP_SOCKET.ISS]
mov [ptr + TCP_SOCKET.SND_UP], edi
mov [ptr + TCP_SOCKET.SND_MAX], edi
@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ macro tcp_rcvseqinit ptr {
push edi
mov edi, [ptr + TCP_SOCKET.IRS]
inc edi ; SYN ocupies a sequence number
inc edi ; SYN occupies a sequence number
mov [ptr + TCP_SOCKET.RCV_NXT], edi
mov [ptr + TCP_SOCKET.RCV_ADV], edi
pop edi
@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ tcp_disconnect:
DEBUGF DEBUG_NETWORK_VERBOSE, "TCP_disconnect: %x\n", eax
cmp [eax + TCP_SOCKET.t_state], TCPS_ESTABLISHED
jb tcp_close ; Connection not yet synchronised, just get rid of the socket
jb tcp_close ; Connection not yet synchronized, just get rid of the socket
test [eax + SOCKET.options], SO_LINGER
jz .nolinger